I am aware of the sun
At least enough to miss its warmth
When it sets
And I can feel the difference between
My rain and your rain
And the distance between
But I am not aware of a loss
Because I never had anything to lose
And I cannot feel the difference now that you've left
Because I was never yours to leave
And while you seperate the atoms we left fused together
I am burning down the equations we built our lives around
As it is, I will hang up my white coat
And take off my gloves
And put down my hopes of ever figuring this out
Last edited by ScarredFaith at Jul 8, 2006,
what did I tell you about it's and its?
love dead like a crushed fly

for those of you who said you'd be interested in hearing my lyrics put to music- I started work on recording an album, if you get in touch with me pm or otherwise I'd be more than happy to fill you in
Loved the first three lines, great intro.

I think the weakest part was the middle, the your rain/my rain, and loss/lose lines, If there's anything I can pick out as lower quality than the rest, it's them. Also, I think 6 lines started with "And", which I thought was too repetitive to not be annoying.

Other than that, another good piece from you. Well done.