#1
This song is kinda about repentence. He he he he.
Lol and you are officially getting a song about repentence
from a punk!

If you don't know much about the Bible, you won't understand this song.
Oh! and if you want to kinda picture how the words go with the rhythm it
is kinda a mix of Green Day's song Letterbomb with kinda a mix feeling of
a song by a boy band. BUt the bridge is kinda like an orginal sound of
my band, Broken Silence. And the part where I talk about 8th child, if you re-
search about how you say 8th child in Greek, it is Octavia for a girl. Lol that's my best friend's name. Yes my best friend is a girl lol.

Verse
It's time to leave, time to go back to how I used to live!
I come with a broken heart, and an open mind
to change it all back.

I'm guilty as charged and as I can be! I'm open for a punishment.
On my knees, and praying aloud. To change it all back to
the way it was before!

Chorus
8 sundays and Thursdays,
yet I've found no way to change.
Forgot how it is like to live this way to change my ways and never go back.

Verse
Sun why don't you shine on me? You forgot that I exsist!
Moon why don't you light me up? Cos' I don't know where the light has gone!

Chorus
8 sundays and Thursdays,
yet I've found no way to change.
Forgot how it is like to live this way to change my ways and never go back.

(then here is where the solo goes)

Bridge
And when the night has gone I find no way.
All is lost, no where to be found.
8th child, why don't you come?
You speak words that go beyond their meaning.
Toungues of angels beyond those of men!

Chorus
8 sundays and Thursdays,
yet I've found no way to change.
Forgot how it is like to live this way to change my ways and never go back.

Outro
and never going back, and never going back, and never going back.
#2
good symbolism good your chorus's are the same, nice work there is some spots for adjustment. just look over it and see how you could improve it. These are good lyrics, but all good lyrics have places you could go maybe just add a line or mess with the words to find something better. That's what I do.