#1
This is meant to be an acoustic song of sorts.
Thanks if you comment ^^


I awoke to your eyes
In the middle of the dark
Realised you were gone
I haven't felt more alone
I still feel so alone

You said we'd find a better place
Somewhere we couldn't leave
Not that I'd rather
But you left that night
Did you ever get there?

And I'm not so far away
And that's not my fault
I wish I was there
I wish I'd gotten over you

So I'll wait here and stay
Hopefully the wind will come down
Take me off far away
I'll find you there
I'll find you some where close

And I'm not so far away
But that's not my fault
I wish I was there
I wish I'd gotten over you

I wish I'd gotten over you
I wish I'd gotten over you
I wish I'd gotten over you
I wish I'd gotten over you

I wish I'd gotten over you

And I'm not so far away
But that's not my fault
I wish I was there
I wish I'd gotten over you
#2
like it dude.. very emotional. THANKS .. haha. jk
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#3
Pretty good...I had a momentary brain fart and couldn't think of what the first three lines ment. I thought they contradicted one another but then I realized what it could possibly mean. Now that I've figured it out I think those are my favorite lines in the whole piece. Now, I don't know the rhythm to this, but in the way I read it, it seemed a bit choppy now and then. Like in the second verse. I sang it to myself and it seemed off. I don't know, it may be me. But I'll look for it later and attempt a full crit.

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