#1
Let me just say, this isn't my best work. But, maybe you guys will like it, who knows?

VERSE 1

You're lined up, ready to fall
So shut up, I control you all
Just one push, you will fall down
I will push, you all to the ground

CHORUS

I'm in command now
(You're defenseless as dominoes)
I rule the land now
(You're defenseless as dominoes)
Think realistically,
You will know misery
(Misery-y)

VERSE 2

It's finally, time for revenge
Yes finally, it's time my friends
There's no one, that can stop me
No one, Just wait and see

GUITAR SOLO

CHORUS x2

You're dominoes,
And you're gonna fall


not my favorite thing I've written, but it goes well with the music my band has for it. ok, let me know what you think.
B.C. RICH
#2
o_O i love the opening... i wish i could rhyme that well... really nice duuude
#5
yeahhh, pretty decent song i like thw whole idea behind dominoes, maybe a little more elaboration in lyrics in second verse, but first is done well, and im interseted in how the choruse rhythm goes
#6
I think the 2nd verse could use some tweaking but other than that its pretty good
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