Thoughts of a desperate man

There I sat upon the sand
A dark cold lonely sight
The cliffs eyes watched me
With evil, pain and spite

The wind was blowing through my hair
Howling and screaming in pain
Whistling and blowing at me
Trying to make me insane

The waves thundered through the water
Splashing crashing into me
Drowning in the ocean
Watching the clouds I loved too see.
I hated it, sorry to be blunt. I think that overlooking punctuation really stripped this piece of a lot of it's potential. The imagery was overused, lacking. Sorry, I didn't feel this at all, it came across as simple words on a simple screen simply saying "overlook me"
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