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Just another day in paradise...
As you stumble to your knees
It?s easier to fall than to walk
With all these chains around our feet
It?s just another day in paradise...
And this night seems as cold as ice
No one to hold so close, that?s right,
When we?re alone we find the light

This loneliness, they all call a killer
But I?m proud to call it my friend
If living lonely aint a paradise,
Then someone show me what is

Just another day in paradise...
As I crawl towards my bed
These sheets are stained with the truth and the past
My mind is stained the rest...
Memories they come and go
Just like the sun and the cold cold snow
It?s easier just to never know...
That we were once so close, damn close

This loneliness, they all call a killer
But I?m proud to call it my friend
If living lonely aint a paradise
Well I don?t wana know what is
Cos I?m glad to be by myself
I know I?ll never leave me
Hell freezes over before you come back
But that?s what makes me happy

I don?t wana see the sunset with a girl by my side
I don?t wana make love last, in the dark of the night
I just wana be alone, yer you heard me right
I don?t wana share this paradise

And loneliness is a killer,
But all it kills is my misery
I?m happier without a sickening love
Without a woman...as a leech
I don?t wana be bled til I?m dry of my heart
I don?t wana love cos don?t wana fall apart
I only wana be alone from the start
With this killer that I call a friend
I?m proud to call this my dear friend
Cos it?ll always be there, I can always turn to it
I can share with it til the very end...

please leave a comment, on how i can improve it or if there's anything you like. it'd b greatly appreciated. thanx alot
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I think its a decent song, but some of the rhyming seemed a bit forced.
Wade in the water, child.