#1
A simple tune.


I dreamt I saw you, for the very first time
The stars lit up, and fell to my eye
A thousand red roses, faded to white
Scattered around us, you stood by my side

We danced through the night, and slept through the day
Singing unheard melodies, I often wanted to say
I love you
I love you

Will you ever come back to meet me again?
If I showed up at your door would you be willing to let me in?
If I saw you on the street would I be just another face?
A painted picture of music, to never be heard again


We danced through the night, and slept through the day
Singing unheard melodies, I often wanted to say
I love you
I love you (fade to end)
Its how you look and how you feel
#2
I like everything about it except the "We danced through the night, and slept through the day
Singing unheard melodies, I often wanted to say"

it sounds a little akward maybe the way you play it or w/e it sounds good which is usually the case. I shouldnt be talking though considering I am one of the wors rhymers on earth.

8/10