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well i just finished this today and im looking to get some help its kinds of a chiodos kinda thing i guess you could say but yea the rhymings kinda cliche but w/e help u can give me would be great- thanx a bunch


am i something to you or am i just pawn
stuck inside your world of what you had drawn
il belive that you love me never the less
but it hurts me inside to see what uve become

//go screamo//
bottleing up my thought inside
you quench to know what i have to hide
thinking bout the times
that we had before we drew the line

//chorus//
these city walls are crumbling beneath my feet
im lost in a world of a dying breed <<(the chorus isnt great either)
when i thought i had it all
this was city lost in embers on and on


this is oh to hard on me
so good a friend you seemed you were
il spill my thought for you to see
but you deny <(i dont reely ike this part it just like ends)

like a bird without wings
so important to it scheme
just like them we wont last
im losing you trust in great defeat

//chorus//
these city walls are crumbling beneath my feet
im lost in a world of a dying breed
when i thought i had it all
this was city lost in embers on and on
Last edited by sk8bordingmafia at Jul 10, 2006,