#1
You open the door and pause for a time
Letting sentiments seep though my shield
Although our time is running out
I cannot admit to this yield

So now you're a mere memory
Frozen in time inside my head
but still I wonder what you're doing
And if you remember our goodbye

Your face keeps my foot off the pedal
And I can no longer fake a brave face
Your memory has not yet left me
But your touch I cannot replace

(chorus)
Through everything I've done and said
I blame you for not getting the hint
I would rather leave without a word
Than have to go through this

Just like a bad romance movie
I leave you behind on the road
Though you shake off what just happened
My aching eyes shift into overload

As I drive away as fast as I can
And you shrink in my rearview mirror
I finally let go what I held back from you
And my true feelings are made clearer

Looking away from you at last
My vision is damp and blurred
I don't regret that it's over
I should just be glad it occured
The money feels good
And your life you like it well
But surely you'll time will come
As in heaven, as in hell


May The Road Rise With You...
#2
This is rather good, nice lyrics, wish you luck completing the whole song (tune etc.), I bet it'll be good

Please crit mine
#3
Thanks! And I will!
The money feels good
And your life you like it well
But surely you'll time will come
As in heaven, as in hell


May The Road Rise With You...
#5
Thanks very much!
The money feels good
And your life you like it well
But surely you'll time will come
As in heaven, as in hell


May The Road Rise With You...