#1
Kisses aren't promises
Hugs don't mean a thing
The time we spent together
Is more a nightmare
Than a dream

Just how long is forever?
How long you said it'd be
This thing ends tonight
This thing called you and me

How long have I wasted
Being the only one that cared?
You said you loved me
But you were never really there.

BECAUSE (Because)

Kisses aren't promises
Hugs don't mean a thing
The time we spent together
Is more a nightmare
Than a dream

I'm done with forever
The end is up to me
This nightmare ends tonight
This nightmare of you and me
"Being sober on a bus is completly different that bein' drunk on a bus"- Ozzy

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#4
Quote by 4string-tsurigi
it's good. I guess you could use 'this nightmare' for a song title.

Yeah but what about "This wasted time, (This nightmare)"
#6
Those are all really good, thank y'all... I'm open for critisizm also.. if their is anything in there y'all don't like, feel free to tell me.
"Being sober on a bus is completly different that bein' drunk on a bus"- Ozzy

My lyrics
#9
Quote by Dakota!
Those are all really good, thank y'all... I'm open for critisizm also.. if their is anything in there y'all don't like, feel free to tell me.

I think it's a kick ass emo poem gone song.
#10
These are some good lyrics. What about something like "Forever and tonight" ?
Nightmare is cool, but I mean, its a little boring. Im sure you came up with that yourself before coming to ask us guys. =/
#11
I would have never thought of "Forever And Tonight" that's really awesome... thanks a lot guys.. keep them comin' I need all the options I can get, I'm gonna have to basically kill my band to let us use this.. they'll use the "We're too heavy for this" line.
"Being sober on a bus is completly different that bein' drunk on a bus"- Ozzy

My lyrics
#12
please read forum rules concerning thread titles
Quote by Kensai
Maybe you've heard what the ladies say: "Once you go 77mm you don't go back"