Sounds pretty good man, when both guitars play at the same time in the beginning it sounds cool. The drumming wasn't terrible either...
thank you. yeah, i try and use some maiden influenced guitar harmonies. thank you.
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i didnt like the intro harmonies they didnt time correctly. the drum machine/ midi drum sounded too artificial and plain naff, it was also too loud.
the drums at 1:25ish were AWFUL.
without a bass guitar it feels a little empty. the ending was non existant it just stopped.

depsite my critisms the guitar playing was great! keep that up!! however, the drums have got to be improved. i hope i was of some help to you.

mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=391410
I didn't like the sounding of the drums... The drumming itself wasn't so bad; but the sound didn't sound great, I think it's a little too high for my liking, erm, if high would be the word. But they sound a bit too blunt, maybe that works better?

^ as said above, bass adds emptiness (Maybe this is what's making the drums sound worse for me, not sure).

And towards the end there's two kinda riffs going on, the changeover between them (in one direction, a to b is find but b to a isn't (or vice versa)) doesn't sound good to me - 2:26/27 is one of them, if you know what I mean.

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