This is an acoustic song i have been working on i think its good but something could be better. And if you can think of any lyrics that would be awesome! Any critisism is open so let me know what you think

You've put this in the wrong forum. Try the Tabs & Chords subforum. If you would also take the time to read hpw to use the code feature... so your tab appears correctly... that would keep your thread from being closed again.

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