#1
Live life to the fullest
Even when you're broke
Another round of drinks on me
Don't care if you choke
What's that? My tab's up? I'm sorry
I'm retarded don't you believe me?

If a penny saved is a penny earned
Then a penny spent is a penny spurned
What's that? You want a loan?
No problem brother, I'm not just for show

Now I sit on the street
Looking down, looking beat
My friends they passed me by
No one's helpin' me when I cry
What would the old man say?
Doesn't matter, I'm gonna die

If a penny saved is a penny earned
Then a penny spent is a penny spurned
What's that? You want a loan?
No problem brother, I'm not just for sho
Last edited by candy_rock at Jul 10, 2006,
#2
i like it alot, there are a few things i would change:

No one's helpin' me when I'm cryin
TO
No one's helpin' me when I cry

and is spurned technicly used correctly here?
Then a penny spent is a penny spurned
i dont think it is. anyway i found it rather enjoyable and humorus because there are so many people out there that will spend tons of money they dont have, and then question why they have no money for the essentials. anyway i liked it as it was so true about the message. good job


ps i was looking at your profile and some of your other songs, and noticed not many people really were looking at your stuff, i know another good guitar forum and has a really good songwritting forum too. go to guitartabs.com/forum. i find it a better place to have my stuff reviewed, as the people there give more insightful and honest reviews. nothing agaist UG but they dont give very detailed reviews. anyway either way it doesnt bother me what you chose, but if you do go to the other one, my user name is the same as this one.