This is another song i am currently working on so far, so please crticize what i have so far!!

A million Souls

A million souls, screaming for freedom
miles apart, and miles from home
They live life minute by second
Barelly surviving on their own

Like moths to our flame
All set to lose the game
Not knowing there fate
We have decided for our own sake

So we scream, we cry
But do we really know why
Set to protect, never to regret
the one million souls we cast away.