#1
plaease leave a couple of comments once you have read this. cheers

My lines are down
My time is out
I'm running around
without a care in the world

Your numbers up
its just your luck
You've said enough
For you to rule the world

I dont know whats going on
I dont know what I've done wrong
All I know is that all this is right
That I'm up on the downside

You sold my soul
Turned it to gold
For all you know
You're feeling sick at the sight

I'm feeling dead
i've got a hole in my head
Its the moment I dread
when we fade into the night

I dont know whats going on
I dont know what I've done wrong
All I know is that all this is right
That I'm up on the downside
#2
it wasn terrible..but it wasnt great...i liked it.... but it was kinda repetitive.......crit mine
"insane"
"Not So Different From Me"
UG's HIPPIE