#1
this ones called paranoid schizophrenia. i wrote this a couple minutes ago while reading up on the aforementioned disorder (probably due to todays events with syd barrett) and really freaking myself out. crit for crit of course.

Paranoid Schizophrenia

There?s a guy down the road,
And I know he wants to punch me,
There are spiders on my wall,
And I know they want to bite me,
There are monsters in my closet,
And I know they want to get me,
I?m at war with my mind,
And I think it?s gonna kill me

Someone,
Help me claw my way out of here
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#2
I like it that's a really cool thing
if you like tied that in as a chorus or a bridge in something
it would be a really crazy transitoin