#2
I enjoy your voice, and the song is fairly put together also. Nicely done, i'd give it a 9/10. Could be a little longer with a little drums and/or electric guitar in there but that's nothing to worry about, it's still good.
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#3
It sounds nice as it is. Makes it sound like a coffee shop song. I'd like to hear drums on it to see how it works... maybe the drums could start at the chorus. The acoustic you have now along with a quiet pulsing bass line in the verse would give the song depth. Vocal melody is something better than what I'd come up with so I don't think I could crit that.

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