#2
post the lyrics
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#3
i like this song man... its cool... great job
but the lead guitar is a little delayed but it still makes for a great effect

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#4
I like it, good job.
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#5
they seem so lame written down but:-

We'll putt of our goodbyes
for another day or 2
**** your pretty face and your tattoos

i wonder for while
well probably be back
same next time next year

i dont care if your sleeping
or wether your around
please pick up
i have something to say


i listen to you on the phone
just waiting for my turn to talk
i dont give a **** what youve got to say

chorus again
#6
That was really good, I liked it. The lead thing at the beginning is really good. The lead thing in the middle sounds kind of off.
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#7
Quote by nasstyman
i like this song man... its cool... great job
but the lead guitar is a little delayed but it still makes for a great effect

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Hey i really like your voice man i recognise it, i think ive heard some of your stuff before, can I add you as a friend so i can comment
#9
The guitar and lead bits sound great, and the singing suits the song I think. But have you tried singing it a little higher? It seems kind of iffy on some of the lower notes and it might sound a little clearer. Just a thought, but it sounds good the way it is too. Good work.


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#10
I liked it. Sounded reall moody and I enjoyed the simplicity of it. Basic and down to the point. With the lyrics there it seemed to say alot more

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