My final time I'll post this damn song, I swear!
why do you keep posting it?
Because I keep updating it and stuff. I'm a perfectionist and if there's mistakes I have to re-record it. Just how I am.
thats the way to be man
Woah, that's really good! Props to u, JJK.
it was alright, the intro was pretty choppy if u ask me,but it's one of those songs that just takes a while to play properly. i like how u learned a lot of different licks, thats always good for ur playing. im assuming thats SRV's version right? or did u make some of thay up yourself? anyways, i'd give it a 6.5/10, keep at it, it's a pretty hard song...
It was pretty much all improv. The intro was a combination of SRV and Hendrix.
Sorry, but although it was a good effort, it could have been better. It sounded like you were unsure of yourself and what you were playing, so just hung back a bit, which you shouldn't because you do seem pretty good. If it was my improv I think I'd play less short notes, and use some more hammer ons and pull offs (although to be fair yours would still probably be better )
Pretty sweet guitarwork. The first half, up till the solo, is great - top notch stuff. However, once you get to the main solo, it gets a little choppy, and I can have the feelin like it's gonna take off and be more fluid, but it never does. After the solo, things kind of go downhill and get a bit dull. STILL the first half is great - just try to add more fluidity and interesting phrasings into your playing to make it a more enjoyable listen. Good job so far though
Crit for crit?
Crit for crit?
Sounds nice. Nice tone.
Thanks for the comments you guys. I appreciate them, even if they're negative, it's all good.
It's pretty good, but parts seem choppy. I think more confidence in wat your playin would help with the choppyness. Other than that it was damn good, good tone too.