#1
Well... it's my friend who wrote the text, as a poem... but I changed some and added music and a chorus... and now it's a song...

Their eyes are watching me
they?re eating my last sense of courage
Breaking me down to my last breath
don?t wanna let it show.
But there?s a mark in my heart
That will never disappear.


Mom, dad, did you know?
and all my friends, did it show?
How far my hate had gone
don?t want this anymore
I don?t know what it?s good for


You say it?s really that bad
That I?ve just made the wounds in my soul
exposed to the human eye
Its my punishment
For being the one I am
and you say that it is great.


Mom, dad, did you know?
and all my friends, did it show?
How far my hate had gone
don?t want this anymore
I don?t know what it?s good for


When the blood the fluid
of my pain
drips longer down my wrist
I know that I?ve been punished.
It?s as natural as it is to breath.
At least for me.


Mom, dad, did you know?
and all my friends, did it show?
How far my hate had gone
don?t want this anymore
I don?t know what it?s good for


Mom, dad, did you know?
and all my friends, did it show?
How far my hate had gone
don?t want this anymore
I don?t know what it?s good for
#4
good song, not much to complain about lol. Crit for crit, my song "love is only skin deep"? Thanks.