i like it, the bassline works for it and i love the lead at the beginning, the whole progression is good, just work on your timing a little bit because the drums were off a little bit at parts, but other than that, with some better production this song will shine, the vocals are very bloc party-ish (which judging by your top 8 is what you were going for)...all in all you have a great song, good progression, great lead parts, i like it

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