#1
well theres alot of deppresion in music today (Emo kids) and well I wrote this piece for myself to cheer me up, this is an anti-suicide song I want to know what you all think.

This place named earth
its full of rock and dirt
filled with hurt and pain
its out of control
like a burning flame
but theres water here
i guess we will be alright

So when things are getting you down
and your sick of it, wanna take a break
think it through again cause things will be ok

If we look real hard
this place aint so bad
with its peaks of bliss
it has its ups and downs
Ill be fine
I think i might stay

So when things are getting you down
and your sick of it, wanna take a break
think it through again cause things will be ok

get all of those thoughts
right out of your head
for the ones who care
will make things ok

(solo and end of song)