#1
This song goes out to all you girls
All you who hurt yourselves
You cut up your arms and make yourself bleed
You cry all the time, you always un happy

Yesterday you call me a hypocrite
Because you saw the scars that forever haunt my arms
And realized that I cut myself too
But this is different; I'm just an ugly guy,
The exact opposite of you.

You’re a pretty girl
You have perfect features
Not only on your face,
But when I look much deeper

(Chorus)
Maybe I can relate to you:hurt
Did your best friend die when you were young?
Did your parents always leave and come back drunk?
Did everyone always spread false rumors?
Were rejected by everyone, including losers?
Do you live in a broken family?
Do your brothers and sisters live thousands of miles a way?
If this all happened to you, then maybe your not so much different from me.

You shove your finger down your throat and see everything that you just ate
I wish I could show you how great you already look
But I guess now it’s too late
You haven’t eaten for two whole weeks
Look at you; you’re so damn skinny
You think that you’re over weight
You decide that it’s not worth living

You’re starving yourself,
Remembering what they said right before they showed you the door
Putting bad memories in front of your health
But no matter how skinny you are
You feel as though everyone’s still laughing
I think you’ve taken this too far

(Chorus)
Maybe I can relate to you:
Did your best friend die when you were young?
Did your parents always leave and come back drunk?
Did everyone always spread false rumors?
Were you rejected by everyone, including losers?
Do you live in a broken family?
Do your brothers and sisters live thousands of miles a way?
If this all happened to you, then maybe your not so much different from me.

Come, have a seat
Sit down for a while
Lets talk about our needs,
And things that make us smile

Maybe we can work something out
Do you really want this surgery?
You don’t have to change yourself
Why would you do this? You look perfect to me

Now do you really want to die?
You think its gonna me the whole world pay
An eye for an eye makes the whole world go blind
Listen to every word I say

It kills me to see you cry
I wish I could make the world change for you
I hate when water fills your beautiful eyes

Suddenly you wake up from this bad dream
You didn’t know that I was here the whole time
Now just go back to sleep
I think now your gonna be fine

Good night and sweet dreams
I hope to see you soon
I hope you never again hurt yourself for guys like me


(Chorus)
Maybe I can relate to you:
Did your best friend die when you were young?
Did your parents always leave and come back drunk?
Did everyone always spread false rumors
Were rejected by everyone, including losers?
Do you live in a broken family?
Do your brothers and sisters live thousands of miles a way?
If this all happened to you, then maybe your not so much different from me.
#2
this is long but good, REALLY good, good job, can you explain it a little more though? im just wondering about this, it is good, though

please crit As the river is bridged, if your critting back
#4
ok..the song is about some of my friends who cut themselves and wanna die..and it just kills me to see them cry....they are soo pretyy you know? but people tell them that they're ugly so they believe it!.... grrrrr

and to you "Ibanez 4" thanks....thanks just soo much for making me stronger...everytime someone "boos" me then thats making me stronger emotionally so thanks.....
#7
wow dude. . . .i hate emo. . . like it sucks monster ****. . . .but i accept that some ppl reele like i, and this song although emo has a posotive meaasge to all those young girls. . . .awesome song i bet it will touch alot off ppl in a very deep way. . . .it's good to see guys careing about girls feelings again. . . ppl are getting so out of touch these days and these are the kinds of songs that could bring us back to where the world needs to be. . . good job. . . . awesome. . . . .but i still HATE emo
#8
well uhh thanks? yeah i agree with what your sayin.... people are outa touch...glad to see some one who agrees with me....
#9
Hey, sorry don't like it very much but that's because my style of writing is much different from yours. But i'm sure other people will like it.