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I really liked this song tbat I wrote a while ago. The screaming parts are the ones marked by "!" or all caps. Comments and input would be appreciated.

Just go! Leave without any care at all!
Forget what youve longed to build!
Its no use to see whats not there
Just go!

We know! That youre the destroyer!
Breaking down all the walls around me!
So you can laugh in my ruin?
We know!

Even after all that youve done
I still pray for you, Pray that you will
Drift into the sea and bathe
Bathe in diluted memories of us
The water will be shallow and stained
With the pain that weve regained
But even I cant settle for less
And I hope that you feel a burning in your chest

Fire a kiss of detestation from the lips
And sing me a song from those raging hips
Keep the silence shattered
In hopes of losing these weasel senses

Maybe the truth was killed
And the lies fully revealed
Its something like music to your ears
Or hopefully needles to your chest
Youve broken me
No longer longing for youre stare
It was the one that killed me
And why should I care

Fire a kiss of detestation from the lips
And sing me a song from those raging hips
Keep the silence shattered
In hopes of losing these weasel senses

Fire a kiss of detestation from the lips [Let the blood erupt from your veins]
And sing me a song from those raging hips [Let them knock me against the floor]
Keep the silence shattered [And notice only workers give blood]
In hopes of losing these weasel senses [Not us]

LET THE BLOOD ERUPT FROM YOUR VEINS
LET THEM KNOCK ME AGAINST THE FLOOR
AND NOTICE ONLY WORKERS GIVE BLOOD
NOT US