#1
Alright let's try this again since my last one got closed. Criticism is welcome as long as it's constructive, i'll try to crit your songs also. Thnx
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number 2.zip
Jeff Loomis

Myspace.com/geneticbydesign
#2
its ok.
Seems like a lot of the time your just repeating the same thing and changing notes for the sake of it being a bit different. let it flow more into what you want it to be, not just the same idea you had over and over with some changed notes here and there
:stickpoke
#3
Yeah Extremely Repetitive. Change it up, come up with some different ideas.

If you could check mine out. It's called another day.
#4
yea i'm not too terribly creative it seems like it needs some work. I'll work on it and get an update in here later, yea sure i'll check yours out.
Jeff Loomis

Myspace.com/geneticbydesign
#5
Quote by madhampster
yea i'm not too terribly creative it seems like it needs some work. I'll work on it and get an update in here later, yea sure i'll check yours out.

don't say that though, you just need to work on getting your ideas out for you to know and express. The mind is like a muscle.
Just work on it.
:stickpoke