#1
I don't usually write lyrics, but i decided to take at a swing at it. I was aiming for a Megadeth/Pantera style thrash song.

All in the Name of Justice

Intro


Pre-verse

This must be a nightmare..
I can?t believe the news I hear
Ten dead?
All in the name of..What?

Verse

You say we?re closer to peace
You say the world?s a better place
One day the world?ll see..
That it?s all a bunch of lies!


Chorus

You kill their women..
You kill their children..
You bomb their cities..
All in the name of peace!

Soldiers die..
Bullets fly..
All in the name of justice!


(Guitar solo)


Verse2:

Now it?s all over
The world?s a ?better place?
Yet I still can?t stop thinking
That it was all just a waste

Chorus

You kill their women..
You kill their children..
You bomb their cities..
All in the name of peace!
Soldiers die..
Bullets fly..
All in the name of justice!

(End)
#3
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good job. definetly could where u were comin from.lol

thanks! i don't think it's good, but i guess for a first effort it's okay.
#4
Haha, no asking for the point of this song. The idea is kind of overused in today's bands, but I actually like the lyrics to this one. It isn't saying "Bush sux coc, teh war must end!1!!1!!!11!1!" I like this song despite the over used idea of anti government. Just don't make all of your songs with the same message and you'll be good! And for a first effort it's great.

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#5
I don't like the 'All in the name of.. What?'

It'd probably work if I heard it to music, but it just seemed kinda awkward to me.

Good protest song.
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#6
As ive said about 15 times tonight its a bit cliche. your chorus also needs work IMO.