#1
Something i'm working on
comment if you like or not



We?ve been through bad times and good
But it dosent matter now
Because since the day I saw you
I knew I wanted you to be mine

You light up my life whenever your near
but I dead each time when your not here
your kisses are like lighting hitting my soul
your touch sets my skin on fire


since that first kiss I knew I loved you
I knew I needed you by my side
To hold me at night
And think about through the day

You light up my life whenever your near
but I dead each time when your not here
your kisses are like lighting hitting my soul
your touch sets my skin on fire

I want you in my life forever
To love and be mine forever
My heart and soul belong to you
For now and forever
With this love so ture

You light up my life whenever your near
but I dead each time when your not here
your kisses are like lighting hitting my soul
your touch sets my skin on fire

time has past and we are no longer
together in life but apart forever
I think of you often
With loving memonires
Of the time we spent together
My heart will always be yours
My love


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#4
I don't like it. It's difficult to write a fresh love song though. So if that song expresses how you feel, keep it.
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#5
Its very simple, that could be good or bad depending on what you put behind it. Overall its not bad though. As muphin said it's hard to write an origanal love song, they all tend to sound the same.