#1
Buzzing voices in your head
telling you to pick every last one

You try to get away
try to run away
but your obsession means
you have to pick one
more

one more twist of the hand
one more pluck
obsessive picker
pick every last one

Diagnosed with the problem
told you are unwell
locked in a white room
piped muzak in a living hell

Only the pills stop you screaming

but when you scream

10000 volts burn in your head
spasms till you cannot feel numb
and the doctor telling you

we've found the problem
you are unwell you need to be
quiet

and take your medicine

but still muffled in a cacoon you scream
kick and bite and scream

vegetable
brain thiefs steal your soul

Now you have forgotten what is a scream

This is the treatment.

Edit: i want to use a computer voice to do the lyrics while i use the vibrato, pitch bend and sustain functions on my keyboard.
Last edited by Draken at Jul 15, 2006,
#2
dang...those are nice lyrics...the only thing i say is you change the title to TEEN Disorder Treatment...but other than that..great work..

crit for crit?
crit my rhymes?:

Lets Get Drunk and Fuck.

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#5
Quote by br&nizzle
dang...those are nice lyrics...the only thing i say is you change the title to TEEN Disorder Treatment...but other than that..great work..

crit for crit?


No because it's meant to be set over a long time from the disease starting to the final vegetation at the end, I don't want people to relate to this is want them to go "oh my god that song is ****ed up **** man" It's not meant to nice or happy or something that people can understand it's meant to confuse people.
#6
Quote by Draken
No because it's meant to be set over a long time from the disease starting to the final vegetation at the end, I don't want people to relate to this is want them to go "oh my god that song is ****ed up **** man" It's not meant to nice or happy or something that people can understand it's meant to confuse people.


if thats what your goin for then GREAT JOB...

they are confusing...but in a good way...they make you think

good work...

crit for crit?
crit my rhymes?:

Lets Get Drunk and Fuck.

Subtle Arrogance

Do you realize, that i can clearly see your clitoris through your jeans?

Quote by Shaepwnsyou
They're very religious, so they have butt sex to save their virginity.