#1
Well,
Iv'e writting this song about the war that is being going on in my country this days,
The war in Israel against Hezbollah...
I also written music to this lyrics and played with my band.

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DiViDeD LaND - Blood of the falling forces
Lyrics By: DiViDeD LaND

Song Lyrics:

Verse I:
The sirens are showing their existence,
Screaming are coming from the woods and seas,
Only the shading of the color green are threatening,
In A cruel battle you can't win...


Chorus:
When the shades are coming out in the light,
You can smell the blood of the falling forces,
Ghosts are bonding upon the sky,
Shadows spllit ways with the wind.
Chaos signs the big, fire!


Verse II:
And there I saw them, there they was,
Runing away like they were naked,
The blaze of the blood on the ground,
Reflecting on the rage of this solid sound...


Chorus:
When the shades are coming out in the light,
You can smell the blood of the falling forces,
Ghosts are bonding upon the sky,
Shadows spllit ways with the wind.
Chaos signs the big, fire!


Verse III:
Why didn't we think of it before?!
Why they were so blind?!
Why the time can't just go back?!
And why, why, whyyyyyyyyyyy
They just deserved to die???!!!

Last edited by MiNd.FreAk at Jul 15, 2006,
#4
That last verse is awsome, Overall i like it alot.

You can smell the blood of the falling forces,
Ghosts are bonding upon the sky,
Shadows spllit ways with the wind.

That one line gave me chills
#6
I agree with heasecase, those lines are awesome dude, well done!

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#7
that was really good, really liked it, may i ask what kind of band you are, what style of music you play???

everysingle line gave a very good image of what it must be like, chilling.

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#8
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that was really good, really liked it, may i ask what kind of band you are, what style of music you play???

everysingle line gave a very good image of what it must be like, chilling.

crit 4 crit?, mi links in the sig


Sure I will crit for crit.
Anywho this song has two versions, Prog metal and A Classic Rock sounds like blues...
The band is more into metal, but no trash / death.
#10
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I like this song man... good job, seems very well written.


Thanks man, I hope to finish recording it pretty soon...!