#1
Hey.

Here is an intro I wrote today. It seems alright to me. Please leave a crit if you listen, along with a link to some of your work and I will crit yours ASAP.
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#2
The song sounds a bit wierd bcos you seem to be changing styles throughout the intro. You seem to be going from a wierd whimsical chord pattern, to a pop-rock guitar riff. that aside though, hte intro sounds pretty good, but i cant really crit it much bcos its not the whole song. try writing the full song and ill crit it again. cant wait

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=393920
#3
that's not long enough to crit... but it seems like you could get a song going from here. Just use that chord progression with an interesting strumming pattern and write some arpeggios or something over it, and you got a song. but yea, kinda hard to crit right now...

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=394923
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#4
its good for what it is, an intro, though i think the two dirty guitars could be easily played on one
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