#1
Just looking for a little feedback on a clean little tune I made up. Not my usual style of playing. I'll be sure and check out your stuff too. Thanks.

http://erock503.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/321527/.321d7150/stream.m3u

if the link doesn't work, it's http://erock503.dmusic.com , last song on the page at the bottom. It's a Framus Cobra amp mic'd with an SM57.
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#2
Nice :p
sounds very good, you could use it as an intro for a song, would give a cool effect
#3
thanks man
I was thinking that too, maybe break into a nice heavy riff.

Anything you want me to check out?
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#4
I really like it. Very smooth and clean.

You should definately try to go with a heavier riff to go with it.

Very nice. Keep at it
#5
That was cool. Maybe this could be an acoustic instrumental rather than extending it into a metal song.
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#6
Deep linking works only 24 hours on DMusic. Then they change the stream key. Bastards.

I liked the playing, allthough the tone was a bit too sharp/thin IMO. You could definitely develop this into a good song.
#7
yeah man, that was good. i could definitely see it being and intro to a song or just a full acoustic piece by itself. cool stuff, it would sound nicer if you thickened it up a little though.. it sounded a little treble-y haha. i guess. so yeah keep up the good work man.

here's my stuff:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=395508