#1
everything in (Parenthesis) is in a screamo tone….with that said, here goes everything:


You asked me what’s so great?
About a girl named Rebecca
The answer is: “Everything”
They say birds of a feather, they flock together
That’s our problem: we need to be together
(say yes angel, just say yes)

I’m in love with you
Rebecca, my angel
But else can I do?
With these feelings crashing down on us?

Now Lets Go outside
It’s a crazy thing: (Love)
It makes everything feel so right
So now can you prove my luck?
(say yes angel, just say yes)

Today, we talked for hours
About nothing in particular
They always say to stop and smell the flowers
And just take your time
(I’LL WAIT FOR YOU FOREVER! Say yes angel, just say yes)

I don’t want you to end up with some one who’ll treat you bad
So angel, just hear me out:
I could never treat you like that
I know you say you know but do you really know?
Can I prove myself to you?

(Chorus)
I want to give you everything
Five Feet and four inches of beauty is all I need
I think you should have everything
That’s why I want you to be with me

I would give anything you want and everything you need
Just give me a command
What you get is more than you see
Now just let me hold your hand
And give you everything
(Say yes angel, just say yes)

I want to hear you laugh like I did today
I love the poem you wrote earlier
I wanna know if I can stay
My friends ask, “What’s so great about her?”

My reply stops them in their tracks
They laugh at the simple words I tell them
The answer is “She’s everything to me”
(Say yes angel, just say yes)

(Chorus)
I want to give you everything
Five Feet and four inches of beauty is all I need
I think you should have everything
That’s why I want you to be with me

(Bridge)
With all that said and more thoughts of you in my mind
I think I’ll just go to bed
And dream of how to make this right
(Say yes, angel just say yes)
Goodbye
I’ll call you again sometime
Believe me, that’s a promise
I love talking with you one on one
Just like this

You could make me cry by simply saying no
You could give me the best day of my life if you said one word
(Say yes angel just say yes)
I could make you happy,
No matter how many tears have fallen to the floor
I could make things that never matter
Mean more than before
(Say yes angel, just say yes)

(Chorus)
I want to give you everything
Five Feet and four inches of beauty is all I need
I think you should have everything
That’s why I want you to be with me

thanks for reading, i hope you enjoyed it....its about this awsome girl named Rebecca who doesnt give herself enough credit....she should think higher of herself seeing how she's everything to me....no matter what she says: i DO need her and i DO lover her and i DO want to be with her.......shes the coolest person i know, and i want her to have everything, because thats what she is: EVERYTHING TO ME!!!!

Peace out, more coming soon
UG's HIPPIE
#3
Read the title rule in the Forum Rules/FAQ. I have to close this, you can repost it with a correct title (no crit4crit in the title). If you continue doing this, I will have to warn you.