#1
This is my first song and i'm kind of new to writing so i would like anykind of feedback. thanks.


Thinking of your eyes they make smile
I've watched them for a while
and i could watch them forever

Your face it brightens up my day
and no matter what you you say
it gets me through the hard times

This feelings eating me inside
and though i try and try and try
it never seems to come out right

While we're sitting here tonight
i think that i just might
tell you i love you

Eventually we'll go our separate ways
and though im dreading that day
i know its coming

I put in the back of my mind
because im sitting here with you tonight
and theres no other place i could be happy

This feelings eating me inside
and though i try and try and try
it never seems to come out right

While we're sitting here tonight
i think that i just might
tell you i love you
i love you