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Hey,this is my first post in the forum,id appreciate some crit for crit?

A Cut Above

Take this sterile knife and
Place it on your face
make the cut,dont go too deep
and stare out into space

One touch can change an appearance
But cannot hide the scars
sometimes you should face the future
not hide from the past

I cant quite tell if youre just
Covering up or giving in
I tried to ask but you just shrugged
And lit up one more sin

So tell me darling
Are you happy?
Are you proud of what youve done?
I will never see your face again
Your in someone elses skin.

Walk out of that door and
Never look me in the nose
Dont give me dagger eyes and
Dont strike your plastic pose