#1
This song is about repentance...

Verse:
It's time, to leave. Time to go back to how I used to live.
I come with a broken heart, and an open mind,
to change it all away!

I'm guilty as charged and as I can be. I'm open for a punishment.
On my knees, and praying aloud,
to find a way, to change my ways for good.

chorus:

Eight Sundays and Thursdays, yet I've found no way to change my ways.
Forgot, how it's like to live this way... to change my ways and never going back.

Verse(I'm thinking about putting the bridge instead here):

Sun, why don't you shine on me? Have you forgot that I exsist?
Moon, why don't you light me up, cause I don't know where the light has gone!

chorus:

Eight Sundays and Thursdays, yet I've found no way to change my ways.
Forgot, how it's like to live this way... to change my ways and never going back.

(this is where the solo goes)

Bridge(acoustic):

when the night has gone, I find now way.
all is lost, no where to be found.
Eight Child, why don't you come to me?
You speak of words that go beyond their meaning,
tongues of Angels, beyond those of men.

chorus:

Eight Sundays and Thursdays, yet I've found no way to change my ways.
Forgot, how it's like to live this way... to change my ways and never going back.

and never going back... and never going back... and never going back...

I'm never going back.
Last edited by Prodigy999 at Jul 17, 2006,
#2
I don't think u really need to change that 'sun why don't you shine on me' verse, it was actually one of my favourites although it is just a bit too short, i'm not sure how it will fit to a melody tho if u no wat i mean, the idea is original though and it cud b good if you fix it up a bit!
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#3
I was also thinking about getting rid of that verse and putting the bridge instead there. But still play the bridge again. You think that will be a good idea? Well anyway, I've also changed a little thing in the beginning. O. And the "sun verse" is actually just one verse. Unlike the verses before the Chorus are verses 1 and 2.
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#4
I've changed a little part of this song. It's in the beginning.
I HAVE A BAND NAMED FALLING CONFESSIONS
AND I PLAY LEAD GUITAR
AND I P0WN!!!



"When there's a freakin' will, there is always a freakin' way!"
#6
i like it.... could use some work in content...i mean its great, but it could be better you know? what i mean by that is: it lacks emotion...it almost sounds like it just words....you could change that by using your words to surround the feeling.....
confusing? i know
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#7
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i like it.... could use some work in content...i mean its great, but it could be better you know? what i mean by that is: it lacks emotion...it almost sounds like it just words....you could change that by using your words to surround the feeling.....
confusing? i know


um... I kinda get it... but I'm kinda lost. what the heck does "use your words to surrond the feeling..." mean? lol. Thanks anyway.
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AND I PLAY LEAD GUITAR
AND I P0WN!!!



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