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Another failed attempt,
at living lies and happiness,
we all knew it was going to be hard,
so stoop down,
and fix it with these broken tools,
attempt to move along,
another line, another song
another year lived with the fear of life alone.

So plant this seed,
maybe one day it will grow,
to be something beautiful and bold,
everything im not
I just need,
one more hopeless liar
another log thrown on the fire,
another night in sanctuary,

if i had a nickel for every word you never meant,
i could melt them down
and make a blade,
just sharp enough to let you know i still exist,
my arms lie empty,
in the absence of your touch,
i guess i asked a bit too much of you
such a clever disguise,

So plant this seed,
maybe one day it will grow,
to be something beautiful and bold,
everything im not
I just need,
one more hopeless liar
another log thrown on the fire,
another night in sanctuary,

ill say a prayer for you tonight
ill force a smile out of spite
ill take all the actual feelings
and tuck them in the corners of my mind, ill say a prayer for you tonight
ill force a smile out of spite
ill take all the actual feelings
and tuck them in the corners of my mind,

So plant this seed,
maybe one day it will grow,
to be something beautiful and bold,
everything im not
I just need,
one more hopeless liar
another log thrown on the fire,
another night in sanctuary,

Ill say a prayer for you tonight


I guess thats it for the week for me... feel free to comment, any help is greatly appreciated
#2
nicely done! I seriously dont know what to crit about lol... can you please crit my "love is only skin deep"? Thanks.