not really my kind of music, but guitar needs to be turned down and vocals up. it sounds like ur only using one mic for guitar and vocals at the same time . the guitar work seems kinda sloppy at times.

thx for the comment on mine
I quite like the acoustic guitar. Anyhow, you need to work on your vocals. They were most of the time out of pitch and couldn't really hear the lyrics either. Also, the rhytym seemed to vary, so get yourself a metronome. Twas a good attempt!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=395068