#1
I see the puzzle breaking down.
I feel my feet on the ground.
I see the light beyond the storm.
I feel the prisoner I've become, oh yeah.

I hear the sound of a distant song
singing to my heart to move on.
I've been saying this everyday of my life
I'm gonna see this before I die.

Every step I take
is one more closer
to the end and you.
And with every
word I say
I know, I know
That with every breath
I take, I'm one step
farther from where I wanna be.
I'll turn around before the end.

Everyday is another one wasted
I never said that.
Ever consider that everything
is not as it seems.

Maybe that puzzle
was already fixed
and maybe I
want to fly.
Maybe that light I see
is only temporary calm


Every step I take
is one more closer
to the end and you.
And with every
word I say
I know, I know
That with every breath
I take, I'm one step
farther from where I wanna be.
I'll turn around before the end.


I'm not the one,
I'm not gonna
head for the end.

I'm not the one,
I'm not gonna
see you again.

I'm turning around.

Every step I take
is one more closer
to the end and you.
And with every
word I say
I know, I know
That with every breath
I take, I'm one step
farther from where I wanna be.
I'll turn around before the end.


~I'd really appreciate some constructive criticism. Thanks!!!!
#3
hey man...i dont mean to sound like a selfish prick, but can you crit mine now? im kinda bust and ill get to urs sometime tomorrow.

Thx the links in my sig