#1
'Palindrome Ain't No Palindrome Baby!'

Let me tell you something, a little story of my past.
Involvements with the kids you hate.
But im gonna break you down somehow.
Hell, im gonna break you down somehow.
Just tell me you're on your own.
Just tell me you're coming home.

All I know's what Ive been told. And...
Home is where you make it, (or break it)
Progress is marked through friends and scars,
And I know we're all fading.
All I know's what Ive been told. And...
Home is where you make it, (or break it)
Progress is marked through friends and scars,
And I know we're all fading.

And heres a little secret that I let slip once,
Make a pistol with your fingers and just let rip
And spill my brains all over your bedroom floor
'Believe me I want more.'
I just want someone to call home.
Like consenants to the vowel.

(It's unfinished at the present, it's getting used for my band, just looking for some opinions, Cheers guys, crit for crit)
#2
dude that is crazy bc i just started writing a poem called palindrome! i like it but i suggest using some palindromes in the song even they are simple ones.