#1
At one time, It was the best thing
The best thats happened in my life
But rocky roads, they bring disaster
And in the end, there's only strife
What we had, it came between us
There is no chasing down the past
You thought I was your one and only
But I knew that we would never last

(Chorus):
It started nice at first
I got my quench for thirst
New life that I could comprehend
But fights broke into war
Now your a filthy *****
I wish you pain until the end
[killing the friend!]

You wasted years I'll never get back
And months spent taking all the pain
The final days were held in question
My final call, it broke the chain
It was the last day of our joining
It was the last day of our lives
It was our first time being civil
Long enough for our one last goodbyes

(Chorus)

And then, I felt like I was on top
The game of evil I had won
But then depression came to settle
I'd question if I could live on
Things slowly started to get better
A smile came back to my face
But memories of you disgust me
My life's spent trying to erase
#2
Wow, anger, sounds kind of like nu-metal, unfortunatly, and not the good kind like System of a Down, the Linkin Park kind. Sorry, will you still crit my rap (in the sig)?
#3
Quote by MastaBassist10
Wow, anger, sounds kind of like nu-metal, unfortunatly, and not the good kind like System of a Down, the Linkin Park kind. Sorry, will you still crit my rap (in the sig)?

interesting, a rapper on UG doesent like Linkin Park. I think LP is good but i dont think this song sounds like them, it is however a good song, good job on this

critting back? in sig
#4
Quote by AmplifySilence
interesting, a rapper on UG doesent like Linkin Park. I think LP is good but i dont think this song sounds like them, it is however a good song, good job on this

critting back? in sig
I don't like them because they're cliche and too angry for my tastes. A little anger is cool, but too much is bad.

EDIT: So I'm a rapper, now, eh?
#5
cliche is somewhat right, angry is too but not for my taste. yeah man a rapper/bassist, thats pretty cool man (sorry for post without a crit)
#6
Thanks. It's kind of a personal song, but I embellished it a little to make it sound better. I didn't realize it was coming off as sort of angsty and I didn't plan for it to sound like nu-metal at all. Haha, but trust me, if you knew where I was coming from on this, you would understand the anger more.
#8
^2x Well, we don't, so we can't. Good to see that you're expressing yourself truely, though.
Quote by AmplifySilence
yeah man a rapper/bassist, thats pretty cool man.

Sweet, I totally kick ass!
#9
hey, i like how you put some emotion and feeling into the song to make it your own....it sounds really nice how it is....
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