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I'm a noobie here as you will probably tell but i've been writing music for a while now and wanted an opinion on a newer piece. Just any input would be nice. Cheers


I know this time we?re over and done
But there are so many things that we both did wrong
I look back through our time (together)
And wondered why we didn?t last (forever)
I just want you to realise I cry (inside)
It hurts so bad?????..

This has stopped short
Of the wonders we could have had
And I?ve told you before (that I)
Don?t want this to end
And I cannot pretend
That?s I don?t want you back (again)

I know this time we?re over and done
With time I hope I can stay as strong
Forever I will wonder would could have (been)
And all the things we may have done and (seen)
I hope you realise I?ve gone to die (inside)
It hurts so bad?????..

This has stopped short
Of the wonders we could have had
And I?ve told you all before (that I)
Don?t want this to end
And I cannot pretend
That?s I don?t want you back (again)

I dunno what to do
What to say
Or where to go
All I know is that...
I need you
I want you
And I don?t know how to hold you close again.

This has stopped short
Of the wonders we could have had
And I?ve told you all before (that I)
Don?t want this to end
And I cannot pretend
That?s I don?t want you back (again)