#1
Diamond girls stand on the mound of men
dead from digging them out
stuck in a mine

She gave me my broken heart
she died and the paramedic stabbed a needle in my heart
now i have hole and no surgeon to fix it up

The Angels have fallen but there is
clear blue sky and no clouds
for them to stand on.

When i see this i feel
they are more than words can say
so i draw a picture or write some code

And so i feel lost without you
you took the map and compass
and where the hell in Mianus

I cry alone at night
slicing onions for my dinner
sometimes it hurts when i cut them thinner

Stabbed by a dagger
a spam dagger
buttsecks with a midget man

and this song makes no sense.


This song is a tribute to all cliches may you rock on.
#2
sounds quite emo. hence the ridiculously long song title that has nothing to do with the song what so ever. might jsut be me...

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#3
I wanna hear it with the music...then I'll give my opinion.
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#4
well...The song seems ok....Little.....typical emo? As the other guy said the song title has nothing to do with it....But the title is true! I can go without every meal except breakfast..
#5
It's meant to be cliches. Well mocking them actually.

Let me explain

Diamonds=untouchable but also lots of people died in diamond mines

broken heart = actual faulty heart not love


angels falling = where do angels stand when there are no clouds

expression too much for words = joke about drawing a picture or doing maths instead

lost without you = actually lost in a wood or something with no map because the other person took it

crying alone = onions

dagger = betrayal by small penised man who said it was bigger.
Last edited by Draken at Jul 20, 2006,
#9
I like it. I imagine it would sound very good to the backdrop of music.

It was, however, a little long, and confused the *insert explitive here* out of me, but I suppose that's a good thing. I like how it's left for the listener to interpret.

Now, Crit mine maybe?
Wade in the water, child.
#10
Quote by crawlingfaster
^none of those are cliches


they're not meant to be. It's a sarcastic song.
#11
they arent?

It's meant to be cliches.


i dont understand
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#12
breakfast is the most important meal of the day... just one question

WHERE THE HELL DOES IT SAY THAT IN THE SONG???
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