#1
I don't want a pale white Face
I don't want to win the race
Don't want to put makeup on
I don't even know what's goin' on!

I won't do what they tell me to do
I won't follow them

I don't want to cut my wrists
I may want tatoos on my fists
I don't want to watch today
I just want to be my own way

I won't do what they tell me to do
I won't follow them

They want to be like everybody else
I just want to be myself!
I just want to my own way
I know that doesn't make me insane

I won't do what they tell me to do
I won't follow them
Guitars:
Slivertone SIK-1 (Black w/ Custom Killswitch)
Epiphone Les Paul Custom (Alpine White)

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Hippies at Heart
#2
if its not played fast and loud this could come off as cheezy but not bad. crit for crit? my latest is called jersey devil.
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#3
Ok I'll crit yours, And yes It's played fast and hard.
Guitars:
Slivertone SIK-1 (Black w/ Custom Killswitch)
Epiphone Les Paul Custom (Alpine White)

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Hippies at Heart
#6
maybe don't start every line with "I" - change the style up a bit
still a solid song though