#1
i havent posted in awhile, and i was talking to my brother whos been ina long relationship and was thrown a hard one at him tonight, so i felt this is the good oppertunity to write a song about it really,i did it in like 10-15 minutes so i apologize if its ****ty but here it is..all crits are greatly appreciated...thanks!

What Happened to You

You're entitled to an arguement,
Aslong as you hear my opinion,
What do you want from me?
Having a life after school,
Ain't so bad, just give it a chance
What do you expect from me?
At the age of 22, I know what I want
Where do you stand in my life?
Are you with or without me

Aslong as I've known you
Where did this come from?
We were perfect in our own weird way
What happened to you?

Where do we go from here?
Do we hold hands til the end,
Or do we crumble at the thought of hope,
Look ahead, am I in your future?
Or do you walk the street of loneliness
Make up your mind sweetheart,
I'm not gonna wait forever


Aslong as I've known you
Where did this come from?
We were perfect in our own weird way
What happened to you?
#2
my brothers in a similar situation, rough. pretty good, the first verse could use a little work but maybe thats just me being a dick. crit for crit? my latest is called clear channel.
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