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Hey there all... just thought I'd post this, see what you guys think...

first song, first post, i figured i'd kill 2 birds with one stone.... but not ravens... i like them too much...


Verse 1:
You dug your way into the marrow
And then destroyed it with your Sorrow
A flood of tears was the inception
Then turned to ash with deception

Pre-Chorus:Now the heart is torn
Trying so hard to mend it

Chorus:
Love will never die
And we won't ever forget
All the blinding Lies
For now we live in regret

Verse 2:
The running shadows lead them
Straight into the gallows
White stares meant to condemn
Time has come to sever the rope
Keeping these souls from rest

Bridge:
All these years spent wasted
Forged in blood by her hand
Now I take the quill from you
And I will write my own end


The order would probably be something along the lines of...

Verse 1
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Verse 2
Pre-Chorus
Chorus
Bridge
< Guitar Solo... of course...>
Chorus
Last edited by Ryioku at Jul 20, 2006,