#1
Enamor

with arising beauty of the young
speaks more than blades of a gun
and I hear you
and I fear you
shade blinds out the sun

captivated, polyuria
I want to wash you away
I have to wash you away
I need to wash you away

come unto you live with me
I have one no, I have two
hearts made for you
stop, yes keep me moving
hold on tight, frozen two piece heart
cracks to every word
no, I cant love you
yes, I love you
burn away the river
keep me high and
let the flame piss forever

(chorus)
play beside me in holy gardens
the nirvana I see close
is closer to brimstone
I feel saddened
I feel worthless
I feel everything but happiness
but I still listen to you
I still listen to you.....

arising beauty of the young
I wish I had a gun
and I hear you....
and I fear you.....
ugliness keeps me from....you

captivated, unsaturated, unseemingly
I want to wash you away
I have to wash you away
I need to wash you away

I am broken in the shade
I am held to the flame
I am tired and willing
I am somber and maloncholy
I am I am I am
alone

(chorus)
play beside me in holy gardens
the nirvana I see close
is closer to brimstone
I feel saddened
I feel worthless
I feel everything but happiness
but I still listen to you
I still listen to you.....
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
Last edited by Zug Thug Seany at Jul 21, 2006,
#2
I think it has a good flow to it but i am kinda confused by the choice of words you used. I think you meant enamor/enamour (depends on who you want to spell it) instead of enarmor since i dont think that is a real word. Also you used polyuria which means expelling a great amount or urine. Im not sure if that is what you were trying to use.

If you have time care to crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=397365
#3
woo, yeah i spelt it wrong, and yeah, i meant polyuria...thanks though
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#4
Quote by Zug Thug Seany
woo, yeah i spelt it wrong, and yeah, i meant polyuria...thanks though


Yeah, i was just curious to the use of the word followed by the wash you away lines. Just wanted to make sure i was reading that correctly.