#1
Once again I've caught myself
And run into another wall
I always blame someone else
When really it's all my fault

I thought it was over
I guess I was wrong
What can save me from this?

You again, you got the best of me
I can't believe I left an open door
This time you got the best of me
But that won't be a problem anymore
I said this won't be a problem anymore

All these words they won't suffice
But they're it cause I'm all alone
Maybe it's time to take advice
I can't do this on my own

I thought it was over
I guess I was wrong
What can save me from this?

You again, you got the best of me
I can't believe I left an open door
This time you got the best of me
But that won't be a problem anymore

I don't know what to do here
Should I just run away and hide?
I've nothing left but I'm so near
I need to face the empty night

You again, you got the best of me
I can't believe I left an open door
This time you got the best of me
But that won't be a problem anymore

You got this round
I'll make you pay for it
I've come back down
And next time you won't win
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Originally posted by tyler 417 714
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#2
Man, great job here! The only thing I'd change is the "What can save me from this?", I think it's ok, but since the rest of the song is great, you could try to equalize that little sentence Apart from that, kudos 4 you, this rocks! Btw, the first verse is stuck in my head, it's so damn catchy! Rock On!
#3
thank you thank you. I wrote this about 3 hours ago when I was really pissed (still am) and I haven't re-read it yet.

I will take your suggestion into consideration.

Thanks
Quote by Corwinoid
Metal doesn't hold hands, it gets head in the van before the show. Seriously.

Originally posted by tyler 417 714
Quote by (-) Ions
There's a band called tool?

Quote by NewWaves
People still watch MTV?
#4
That is just great. Especially the first and last stanzas. Good work.

What kind of music to go with it?
Some live, some die. And the rest of us just keep fighting eachother.
#5
Thank you very much.

No music yet...that'll be a while.

Writing music for my lyrics is something I don't do well.
Quote by Corwinoid
Metal doesn't hold hands, it gets head in the van before the show. Seriously.

Originally posted by tyler 417 714
Quote by (-) Ions
There's a band called tool?

Quote by NewWaves
People still watch MTV?