#1
Verse
Lost all feeling now
Nothing left to remember me by
Didn't even get to taste a tear
Didn't get to have happiness

Chorus
A sorry note won't bring me back
Can't repair a shattered glass
Trapped in your womb
You made me a memory

Verse
Lost all inspiration now
Nothing left to scream
Didn't even get to taste a tear
Didn't get to have happiness
Last edited by Inprisoned at Jul 21, 2006,
#2
Y'know, I'm in a relationship right now that all started with a sorry note. It's been great, so maybe consider it.

As for your song, well, it's very, very straightforward. "Trapped in your womb/You made me a memory" is interesting but out of place, to me it feels it doesn't belong. I like the "taste a tear" thing, it's kind of interesting. The whole thing is too simple for me, but not too bad.
#5
Sad. I wrote it while I was listening to The last samuri (?) Soundtrack. Is that how you spell it?
#7
i really like it....its great but i would deffinatly add on to it some lengh...i get what your sayin....
peace out
UG's HIPPIE
#8
It's ok. I would definately add some length. But it was also too simple for me.
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