#1
Hey, everyone

This is just a song I wrote and was thinking what you all thought of it???



Today you a flower that blooms
a ray of light
a spirit in the wind that is free

Today you are a drop of rain
a healer of pain
a dream which cannot be

Tomoorow you will be that which is not
deja vu
the one i forgot

Tomorrow you will be
a distant memory
until the day
your face again i'll see

To the star the light in heavens sky
i'll close my eyes and say goodbuy
remember i will
till the day to heaven i gracefully go

the answers i will never know
its at a place i will never go
the man with sorrow and pain
The stray dog in the rain
#2
Good deep poetry. Probably too deep for me. Didn't understand the concept.lol
#3
good job....i liked it....even though its not really my style, but i still like it...............it feels as though something is missing from it though.....im not sure what to put in...but great job!
UG's HIPPIE