#1
ok this song is about my friend and her bf....i know, i know, its emo...but stillll.....dont be hatein'!


"THE REASON"


She drops her guitar
Remembering pain
Look at her scars
Don’t let her play this game

She punches the wall
now watch her fist bleed
She screams “F*** you all”
If only we could see

Watch her slam the door
Just like you did to her
She cant take it anymore
As her arm crosses a razor

(chorus)
when the pain becomes too much
she thought that she knew love
but you just spit out your insults
and slammed the door of life shut
you are the reason she cuts

you know shes right
she has a reason to hate
now shes putting up a fight
before it gets too late

but instead of holding against
she chooses to love
and learns to forgive
and to put away the gun

the gun that was gonna take her life
a bullet in her heart
to prove she was right
you forced her hand

by her side theres no one there
no one to ease her pain
her only friend
is a razor blade

she begins to slice
blood dripping down
she tries to end her life
and cuts out loud

(chorus)
when the pain becomes too much
she thought that she knew love
but you just spit out your insults
and slammed the door of life shut
you are the reason she cuts

listen to my words
it doesn’t have to be this way
think less about youself and more about her
listen to what SHE has to say


(chorus)
when the pain becomes too much
she thought that she knew love
but you just spit out your insults
and slammed the door of life shut
you are the reason she cuts
UG's HIPPIE
Last edited by ~G{}{}BER~ at Jul 22, 2006,
#2
there was already a horrible written song called "The Reason" by Hoobastank (worst band name ever)

this is just another one.
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#6
"the gun that was gonna take her life
a bullet in her heart
to prove she was right
you were the one who forced her hand to the trigger"

I really liked this song!!!
just one complaint though,

instead of ending this verse like you are, try it like this, it would leave the line verse open for more thinking, cause right now its mostly got me wondering, and then you make me stop wondering when you say "to the triger"

the gun that was gonna take her life
a bullet in her heart
to prove she was right
you were the one who forced her hand

"just a thought, use it don't use it, its your funeral"

R.I.P
#7
aight...your right...im gonna change that now.....thanks for the help and crit
glad you liked it
keep on keepin on
peace out
UG's HIPPIE
#8
OMFG. That is ur best one.. seriously. that is amazing. That hit me hard though. it got me really deep... as all of ur songs do! Great job on this one especially though.
#10
hey.. just was gonna tell u i tried to pm u back... reali i did. it is saying u cant receive them now... so... fix that or i cant pm ya ha..
#13
lol. sounds like 1000000 other songs posted in this forum. fan freaking tastic.
I've seen emo-er.


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